Greetings fellow readers and writers! Well, I finished the first round of edits on Touch of Salar. The good news is that after spending an entire sunny Sunday inside hunched over the keyboard, I still love being a writer! The editing process was informative and it’s exciting work (I am such a writing geek).
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Touch of Salar
The fading aroma of night-blooming cacti still sweetened the air of the healing room. Clay ovens had been fired but a chill remained in the open-air space. M’lan was grateful, because the nightmare had left him drenched with sweat. He leaned against a marble column and basked in the rose-tinted glow of the sunrise. Morning was his favorite time of day, a fresh start, a new beginning. Every day, he channeled divine energy to mend fallen warriors. Every night in his dreams, as if he became a warrior himself, he relived the horror his patients experienced in real life.
His heartbeat slowed and he took a moment to clear his mind and prepare for the first patient of the day.
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About Touch of Salar
Touch of Salar is a high fantasy, m/m erotic romance. In the kingdom of Rakkan, in a culture ruled by gods, mystical orders and magic, a young monk with the ability to channel the healing powers of the god Salar falls in love with a wounded warrior he knows only as The Major. Relations between the classes are forbidden, and things become even more complicated when the monk discovers that the man he is obsessed with is a king’s assassin. If M’lan is found out, he will be put to death, possibly by the Major himself.
Beautiful description and how horrible for the healer to relive what his patients experience. Great 8.
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Excellent descriptions! I feel for the healer having to go through all that.
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Wow, that is a hard burden to bear. I am curious to find out more. Why does he put himself through this kind of pain? Beautiful description as always.
Congratulations on doing your first round of edits!
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Gorgeous description. You’ve captured this reader with the concept of your remarkable story.
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I really enjoy this story and can’t wait to read more each week. Very well done, excellent excerpt!
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Excellent description, lots of good sensory detail. And he’s quite brave to risk those nightmares to help and heal.
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So full of good, descriptive writing. It plunked me down right in the scene, Alexis! Nicely done. 🙂
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The healer is an amazing person to have to deal with all the nightmares…interesting!
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