Greetings and welcome to another edition of Weekend Writing Warriors. I might not be objective about this, but I think WWW is one of the funnest, most diverse fiction sharing hops around. I hope you take the opportunity to check out some seriously awesome writers by clicking on the linky-loo there and continuing the journey, eight sentences at a time.
Things are getting steamy here this week as I continue with snippets from To Catch a Threeve. Last week Constable Axel Blackwood was stunned when the thief he’d just nabbed turned out to be – maybe – the long lost love of his life, Liam Alloway.
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Axel reached up to brush it away, to get a better look. When his hand touched the smooth cheek, the man grabbed Axel’s shirt and dragged him forward into a rough kiss.
For the blink of an eye, Axel’s brain resisted. Liam was dead. This was a thief in the night, not his lost love. Then his body responded to the press of moist lips to his, and logic vanished quicker than fog in sunlight.
And it was like a sunrise, the heat that surged through his body and a delectable, crazy joy that teased every corner of his being. Liam!
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Official Blurb for To Catch a Threeve ~ Release date October 28th ~
Axel Blackwood catches a thief and is astounded to see that he closely resembles Liam Alloway, the love he lost seven years ago in an attack by the evil woodland folk known as threeves. Axel suspects he’s fallen prey to dark magic, but can’t help becoming infatuated with his prisoner. He’s overwhelmed with the hope that he can at last bring his lost lover home, despite everything that warns him it’s all a diabolical trick.
Bryn Darrow, the half-threeve, half human orphan sent to trick Axel and rob him of much more than a simple gem finds himself equally as fascinated with his handsome human captor and the lure of someplace to call home, but he knows deep down that the constable is in love with a dangerous illusion. When he’s commanded by the threeves to murder Axel and steal a witch’s powerful grimoire, he’s forced to decide between the only family he’s ever known and the one person who might rescue him from a life of isolation and pain.
Will Axel and Bryn be forced into a deadly confrontation before they can discover the truth?
Ugh, so good! Though I fear it’s all going to go sideways very soon. Great eight!
I totally agree with you- I love this group and always look forward to Sundays. Reading all these snippets is like opening a pile of tiny presents.
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I agree, I’ve enjoyed becoming part of this group. It is a great way to discover new authors. Enjoyed the snippet.
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The thrill of lost love returned. Your writing is exceptional.
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This is great. Love this line especially> “Then his body responded to the press of moist lips to his, and logic vanished quicker than fog in sunlight.”
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Mmm, delicious reunion. I’m with Eleri. That line really stood out to me too. So well-written! Great work, Alexis! 🙂
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LOVE this story and the joy of that kiss radiated off the screen when I read it…but now I’m worried for both of them, of course. Excellent excerpt!
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The cynic in me says that kiss was well timed to circumvent Axel’s doubts. The rest of me thinks that was a smoking hot kiss, and what could it hurt? 😉
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Oh I love that it is Liam!! Beautiful how Axel recognized him in the kiss. Great 8!!
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This really shows how heart’s desire wins over logic even when what we want may not be real.
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That must have been some kiss.
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But is it true?
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What sensual and beautiful prose.
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Wow, a dead lover coming back to life?! Talk about finding the unexpected;). Great snippet.
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That’s lovely…I can feel the joy in that moment!
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Great description, especially your imagery of his common sense vanishing like fog against sunlight. I wish I was creative like that (I’m too literal with descriptions).
Keep smiling,
Yawatta
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