Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, a great place to share, discover and enjoy an amazing range of fiction. This week (and the rest of June) I’ll be sharing from my upcoming release, the m/m contemporary fantasy, Betwixt and Between. I hope to have the blurb and cover soon! Release date is June 30th.
This is from the opening chapter. Last week we watched as Ezekiel used his violin to spin a musical trap for an unsuspecting liosa (light elf).
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Ezekiel pulled some of the liosa’s essence toward him along the strings and conjured a clearer picture. Human male, slim and tasty. Ezekiel’s favorite form. The man had the dark mocha-colored eyes of a High-Wood alfar, but Ezekiel recognized no clan markings, no talismans, no link to the past. This was most excellent. No one would miss him. A fresh, unclaimed source of power, his for the taking. Even the dark queen Ysolde might not be aware of him.
The liosa held a camera and was about to take Ezekiel’s photo. He was as good as caught.
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Hmmm. Many a slip betwixt cup and lip. Will this one be taken?
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Tasty? There are so many connotations to the word. Marvelous scene! And way scary evil.
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Ezekiel is so very NOT nice… I think. I (kind of) hope… because he makes a cool character and setting us up to sympathize eventually with a very bad guy is kind of cool.
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Great snippet, Alexis. Looks like Ezekiel may have met his match.
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After all the mouthwatering descriptions, the lines at the end make me think this meal won’t come so easily after all.
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I like how cool and calculating Ezekiel is. He seems like the interesting-evil type of character, the kind whose motivations you can understand, respect, and even sympathize with, as opposed to someone without any positive qualities.
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I agree. I love writing villains with heart.
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Beautiful description! Though I have a feeling Ezekiel’s way isn’t as clear as he thinks. 🙂
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Interesting to end with the idea of a photographer.
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Oh dear I feel sorry for the liosa, but I’m wondering if this isn’t all going just a bit too smoothly for Ezekiel…I’m hopeful he gets a surprise! Great snippet.
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Oh, no! This is not going to end well for that elf!
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I want to yell at the elf, “RUN!!!!!” 🙂
Your writing simply flows, Alexis. Beautiful snippet!
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I love the dark tones you managed to put in such a short snippet. very dramatic and makes me want to turn the page 🙂
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