Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, where writers of all stripes and spots share their work in eight to ten lines. This week I’m continuing with excerpts from the first chapter of my new release, Betwixt and Between, an m/m contemporary fantasy. Our hero Ian has encountered an elf with mischievous intentions busking for coins and souls in a dark stairwell at the Pike Street Market. This is right after last week’s snippet.
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Though poorer than a church mouse, Ian felt a strong urge to empty his pockets into the violin case. That would be a mistake. Giving a coin to a magical being created a bond that could link you forever to a malevolent spirit. At least he’d learned that much from his Aunt Cleona. At the thought of his aunt, he remembered the protective token she’d given him the last time he’d run afoul of a fairy living in Gas Works Park. He reached for the moonstone necklace he always wore now, and when he touched it, the grip of the music loosened. He hadn’t noticed the tightness in his chest until it was gone.
Further proof he’d been hexed came from the musician’s reaction. The remarkable gaze shot up again, and he focused on Ian’s face for longer than a second. It wasn’t exactly an evil look, but not friendly either – calculating, that was the word.
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Blurb:
Obsessed with magical creatures since childhood, tabloid reporter Ian Evers never experiences satisfying proof that the magical realm actually exists until he falls into an entrapment spell set by a handsome but dangerous elf. Barely escaping with his soul intact, Ian is able to undo the hex, but he can’t escape the very real infatuation he’s developed for the fierce elf.
Ezekiel Stormshadow is a svarta, a dark elf who serves the queen of the dark realm. The realm of darkness needs the power of light to survive, and while hunting the last few magical beings on earth, Ezekiel discovers Ian, a light elf who’s unaware of his true nature and ripe for the plucking. Their brief encounter awakens a great hunger in Ezekiel, and he’s determined to feast on the light elf’s power and body before the queen intervenes and claims Ian for herself.
Driven apart by the ancient imbalance between the dark and light realms, an evil queen starved for power, and their fear of each other, Ian and Ezekiel are relentlessly drawn together even though their union might destroy them both.
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Captivating snippet. Good job he had the moonstone. Love the cover and the title.
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I love all the magic, both good and bad, in this story. I particularly like the moonstone necklace.
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Oh, am loving the hint of the magic rules you’re giving us. Another fabulous snippet!
Can’t wait to see what Ezekiel thinks about this situation;).
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I liked how you gave him family agency with the moonstone necklace. And I like the magic too. Great Eight, Alexis.
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Ooh, I LIKE it. The snippet had an air of menace for sure and I just want to keep reading. Excellent!
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Excellent excerpt, capturing the strange relationship forged by magic.
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Whew! He barely dodged that one. I’m liking the world you’re building, Alexis! The idea that they live among us… Wonderful!
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You’ve told us so much about Ian and the magic of his world in just a few words. I need to read this book!
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Back away from the musician! He might not be evil, per se, but he has terrible intentions
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very intriguing snippet and the title is great. I love a little fantasy and magic in stories
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