Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors and another thrilling episode torn from the pages of From Mars, With Love, my m/m space-opera-in- progress. Last week we left our hero Eli stuck in a stastis pod without having been hooked up to the life support gizmos. The slave ship was under attack and the crew raced off in a panic. The goo was rising fast and things were looking grim.
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“C’mon, c’mon, c’mon,” Eli whispered to the hoped-for marines. He tried to suck in more air. There wasn’t any. His hands, still pressed against the lid of the pod, grew blurry as his vision swarmed, sprinkled with black dots.
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A loud hiss followed by a pop snapped him awake. The seal split and the cover flipped back with the assistance of a black clad figure in a space helmet. The visor was black as well and Eli couldn’t see a face. He took a huge gulp of air, pushed away the arm still holding the lid, sat up and hung half way out of the pod. His body was still partially paralyzed. He choked, dry heaved, then slid out of the pod like an eel escaping an aquarium.
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From Mars, With Love follows the adventures of Eli and his pal Rilke, two down-and-out scavengers from earth as they’re abducted by slavers, arrested by space marines, and dumped on an unwelcoming outpost on Mars. Eli’s troubles are only beginning when he finds out the ring his mother gave him contains the life force of a powerful but dormant alien and the mysterious man he has a huge crush on happens to be an alien artifact smuggler. Eli’s just trying to make it on Mars, but can he survive the dangerous political intrigue swirling around him? This erotic space opera is a work-in-progress. Stay tuned to this blog for ongoing excerpts and updates.
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So visual! Great writing.
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This reader gave a sigh of relief when Eli finally was released. Wonderful scene.
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Great description. I knew I’d like this snippet as soon as I saw the title–about time he crawled out of the muck!
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Oh thank heavens! I gulped that air along with him. Great description and imagery!
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I’m glad he finally got to escape, though I can’t help but wonder if his troubles will soon get even worse.
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Good for him! Loved the imagery, was holding my own breath 😉 Great snippet!
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That is an icky way to travel! That image of him oozing out of the pod is well-done. I wonder who his rescuers are… they seem a bit Men in Black-like.
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Love it! Such a tense moment. For a second I wasn’t sure which way you were going to go:).
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Extremely visual writing, Alexis! He didn’t have a moment to spare…
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