Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop where writers from a wide variety of genres share from their work in excerpts of ten sentences or less. First of all, thank you to everyone who tracked me down last week even though I forgot to sign up. Doh! Perhaps you heard that scientists have been able to capture an image of a black hole: turns out, it is located in my brain.
Second of all, let me apologize in advance for the blatantly run-on first sentence. Sometimes a writer’s got to do what a writer’s got to do (i.e.: cheat).
And now, to the snippet. I’m sharing from my reimagined fairy tale inspired by Snow White, cleverly titled Snow. Our hero Prince Gabriel is having a reunion with his brother Tristan, who might be more than a little drunk. You can read last week’s snippet here.
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Tristan’s smile turned into a toothy grin, a signal that Gabriel had learned long ago meant he should run and hide, but Tristan still held him in a firm grasp and besides, as a grown man, he couldn’t really use that tactic anymore; whatever his brother the king dished out, he would have to take.
“Gavin!” Tristan shouted, “You’ve returned empty handed. What good are you, huntsman?”
Gavin Falkner walked up behind Gabriel, boots swishing through the grass. “All sensible creatures have gone to ground on this dreary day.”
“Then find me a nonsensical one. Perhaps if we ventured into the Black Forest, we’d find a goblin or troll to bring down.”
“Hardly a suitable trophy for a king,” Falkner said as he stepped up to stand beside Gabriel. “I found your brother instead.”
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Blurb-in-progress for Snow, a reimagined fairy tale:
Following the death of his mother the Queen, Prince Gabriel is called home by his brother, now King. Gabriel hopes for a reconciliation with his estranged brother, but all is not well at Castle Rosenthal. King Tristan has fallen under the sway of a scheming alchemist, the magical denizens of the bordering Black Forest are on the move, and Gabriel begins to fear for his life. Is the handsome huntsman in on a plot to assassinate him, or is there an even darker, more evil force afoot? A forced flight into the Black Forest may expose ancient powers at work, if Gabriel can survive long enough to uncover them.
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Weekend Writing Warriors is a blog hop where writers from a wide variety of genres share from their work in excerpts of ten sentences or less. Click the link to check out the other writers participating today. It’s a great way to discover your next favorite book
Uh-oh! I worry what Tristan will do or say next. Poor Gabriel!
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yeah, Tristan seems a bit unpredictable. I’d probably want to run and hide, too.
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Hmmm, the dialogue makes me wonder what will happen next. Seems ominous but couched in faux good humor…very atmospheric! Enjoyed the excerpt, love the story.
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Sounds as if Tristan would prefer the goblin to the brother at hand. Indeed, poor Gabriel! But I think he’s just found a champion!
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An interesting snippet. I always enjoy your sense of humor
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I trust that the illustration isn’t a picture of your hero?
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Ha! No, that’s one of the Black Forest creatures he might encounter.
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Oooo I love that final paragraph! And that goblin photo actually made me chuckle. He just looks so sad! 😀
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Uh oh. Tristan’s going to do something Gabriel will regret. Love the pic of the troll.
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I like how Tristan’s smile means trouble.
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Tristen is unpredictable it would seem. Love the photo. 🙂
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