Hello and welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop where a bunch of really great writers share tantalizing tidbits from their works-in-progress or published novels. I’ve been sharing from a work-in-progress, the m/m space opera From Mars, With Love. Our hero Eli has been rescued from a life of slavery by the mysterious man in black and the Intergalactic Free Market Trade Patrol Marines but what fate awaits him now? I’ve skipped ahead a bit to where Eli is being escorted out of the slaver’s ship. For those of you paying attention to little details, yes, they did find Eli some clothes to put on- one of the white jumpsuits the Asteroiders were wearing.
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“The officers tried to escape via shuttle,” one of the marines said, “but their launch bay is blown all to hell.”
“That must be what set off the distress beacon – morons.” The marine on the left shook his head.
They’d reached the wrecked entrance to the shuttle bay and Eli wondered how he’d survived it. The metal doors, floor and ceiling were scorched black and warped.
“Is that how you got your burn?” the man in black asked from behind.
“Never jam a fully powered stun gun into a fission panel if you can avoid it,” Eli said, glancing back over his shoulder.
A tiny smile curled the corners of the man’s lips, making them even more sensual. “Didn’t think a ground rat careless enough to get swept would be that resourceful.”
Careless?
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Eli might have a few words for the man in black next time. But until then, don’t forget to continue the hop.
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From Mars, With Love follows the adventures of Eli and his pal Rilke, two down-and-out scavengers from earth as they’re abducted by slavers, arrested by space marines, and dumped on an unwelcoming outpost on Mars. Eli’s troubles are only beginning when he finds out the ring his mother gave him contains the life force of a powerful but dormant alien and the mysterious man he has a huge crush on happens to be an alien artifact smuggler. Eli’s just trying to make it on Mars, but can he survive the dangerous political intrigue swirling around him? This erotic space opera is a work-in-progress. Stay tuned to this blog for ongoing excerpts and updates.
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This post is part of an ongoing blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. Every Sunday, participating authors post eight to ten sentences from a published work or perhaps their current work in progress. Then we hop to our fellow warriors’ blogs and check out all the fabulous fiction that’s happening! I heartily invite you to participate as a reader, writer, or both. It’s a great way to discover your next favorite book. Click here or use the address: http://www.wewriwa.com
Sounds like they’ve been through quite an adventure! I like the attitude in the speech.
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Ooh, those are fightin’ words! Take it away, Eli, in your sexy white suit. 🙂
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I like the dialogue. There’s some tension there.
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“ground rat” and “get swept”. I am really liking your lingo! makes me feel like I’m on the inside. 🙂 Wonderful world-building, Alexis! Write faster. 🙂
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I fell right into that scene. Felt like I was there. Excellent job.
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Just the right tension between arrogance and approval. I can’t wait to see what Eli ‘s response is
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Ha! I like the man in black already. Nice tension.
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I really am fond of Eli and I’m liking the guy in black a LOT, so excellent excerpt and I’m ready for more!
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He did get caught, but he has to be lucky every single time to stay free–and unlucky only once. I’m not sure ‘careless’ is at all a fair label!
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Eli gives them a great tip! I like the dialogue in this snippet.
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