When I read the theme for this week’s My Sexy Saturday blog hop, which is My Sexy First Date, it quickly dawned on me that my characters never go on dates. Maybe that’s because I write mostly fantasy so normal activities like dating never seem to fit into the plot. Or maybe my characters are too weird and conflicted to actually ask someone out on a date. Or maybe it’s because I love the enemies to lovers trope so much they’re usually too busy fighting and scheming to sit down and have a glass of wine with each other. So this week’s seven paragraphs, which isn’t actually a date, is about as close as I’ve gotten to writing one. This is the first time Ian and Zeke meet face to face, and it happens in a coffeeshop, so its kinda sorta like a date (OK, not really). I posted from this scene out of Dark Heart a few Saturdays back, so click here if you want to catch up. Zeke, by the way, is a dark elf who’s courting Ian. Ian has yet to discover his true nature. He speaks first.
“And who are you exactly? What are you?” Ian tried to pull his hand away. The elf clamped down harder. Actual physical contact sent shockwaves rippling beneath Ian’s skin.
“My name is Ezekiel. I am what you in your human ignorance might call an elf.”
“A dark elf? A svarta?” Ian asked. Ezekiel shook his head.
“Those distinctions have long since passed away and become meaningless. There is only magic and not magic. The people who surround you are not magic.”
“I don’t know about that. Cleona managed to ward off your hex last night.”
“A pity. She’s a spell spinner who steals her power. She’s drained you dry, but I could refill you.” He lifted Ian’s hand and kissed it. He nibbled on the knuckles and ran his tongue along the fingers. Ian nearly came then and there, but willed himself to resist.
“Forget it. I don’t believe you. I’m not going anywhere with you.”
Don’t forget to visit the other writers participating in this week’s hop– wether it’s seven words, seven sentences or seven paragraphs, it’s all sexy, it’s all fun and it’s all free!
Nice snippet. I really enjoyed that. Your human is in trouble 🙂
I love elf books! Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing and being part of My Sexy Saturday
Not sure if my comment took or not. If it did…you can delete this one…LOL!
I love elves and everything about them. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing and being a part of My Sexy Saturday.