Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Beneath The Jumpsuit


Welcome to this week’s edition of  Weekend Writing Warriors.  While it might be another fog-enshrouded winter day here in the Pacific Northwest, on Mars, the sun is always shining.  Unfortunately for Eli, he’s not there yet, and might never be. The slave ship that abducted him is setting its coordinates for Titan, notorious for  flaunting  the inner-system anti-slavery laws.  In case you haven’t guessed, I’m continuing with my space opera in progress, From Mars, With Love.  Things go from bad to really bad when Eli sees who his captors are and what they have planned for  their prisoners.


Asteroiders were rarely seen on Earth, especially at ground level.  They’d been developed in  the asteroid belt beyond Mars and were a most reviled class of altered human; most of them were more artificial than flesh. The one that moved closest to Eli had a neck and forearms made of black rubber tubes twining around coiled copper muscles. What went on beneath the jumpsuit was anyone’s guess. His fleshy human fingers tapped at a wisepad as he scanned each prisoner in turn and made disparaging remarks to the security bot about their potential value. “Bottom of the barrel sweep, if you ask me. I hope the captain didn’t shell out full credits for this lot.”

A human voice crackled out of the hovering bot, “Hardly seems worth the trip, but some alterations while they’re in stasis might help.”



Farscape improved dramatically when Crichton ditched his white jumpsuit.


This post is part of an ongoing blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. Every Sunday, participating authors post eight sentences from a published work or perhaps their current work in progress. Then we hop to our fellow warriors’ blogs and check out all the fabulous fiction that’s happening! I heartily invite you to participate as a reader, writer, or both. It’s a great way to discover your next favorite book. Click here or use the address: http://www.wewriwa.com

16 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors ~ Beneath The Jumpsuit

  1. Love, love, love the world-building!!The description of that Asteroider was out of this world (pun intended). Stasis sounds like a wickedly scary place/condition to be in.

    I miss Farscape. Is there a movie coming??? We’ve had nothing since the Peacekeeper Wars that I know of… ~sigh~


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