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I’m sharing from my current WIP, a reimagined fairy tale inspired by the take of Snow White. I’m nearing the end of this scene. I know it seems like I’ve been saying that forever, but it’s coming! And then I’ll move on to other things, but for now, Gabriel is having reality pulled out from under him. And like most victims of gaslighting, he’s just fine with that, as long as it keeps the perpetrator happy. You can read last week’s snippet here.
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Gabriel scanned the line of men nodding their heads. They were all Tristan’s men, none of the visiting lords had lasted this long into the hunt, and so the story could be retold in a version more flattering for Tristan. Gabriel didn’t mind, and actually hoped that Tristan came to believe it himself. That jealous rage in his brother’s eyes had unsettled him deeply.
And then there was the arrow—Tristan’s arrow. He forced away the treacherous thought. It hadn’t happened, just as the stag had not appeared before him, but before Tristan.
One man was not nodding. Gavin Falkner watched Gabriel closely, and when their gazes met, an acknowledgement of the truth passed between them.
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Blurb-in-progress for Snow, a reimagined fairy tale:
Following the death of his mother the Queen, Prince Gabriel is called home by his brother, now King. Gabriel hopes for a reconciliation with his estranged brother, but all is not well at Castle Rosenthal. King Tristan has fallen under the sway of a mysterious noble woman with a dark past, and all along the border of the Black Forest, magical denizens are on the move. Gabriel begins to fear for his life. Is the handsome huntsman in on a plot to assassinate him, or is there an even darker, more evil power afoot? A forced flight into the Black Forest may expose ancient magic at work, if Gabriel can survive long enough to uncover it.
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Poor Gabriel! I fear what’s going to happen when he meets Tristan’s fiancée.
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Hmmm… Is that a good acknowledgment by Gavin, or not??? This story is so good!
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Thanks! Gavin isn’t quite sure himself yet.
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This is great unspoken commitment between Gabriel and Gavin. It serves to bond them closer.
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That last line definitely has me intrigued. Is Gavin going to be an ally…or not. Can’t wait to read more.
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Great scene. He’s in a tough spot for one who’s a survivor, and I’m glad Gavin is there as an ally.
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There is no end to your fascinating snippets, my friend.
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So glad he has an ally. Otherwise, he’d be in deep doo-doo.
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Soooo good! Looking forward to reading more.
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More bad things lie ahead no doubt. Very foreboding snippet here…well done!
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