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Today I’m finishing up the scene from Masters and Mages 2: Blood of Salar that I’ve been posting from over the past several weeks. While confronting rebel soldiers who were desecrating the chapel of Ka’alar, M’lan called upon the long dormant god of death for help and was surprised when the god answered. I’m under the limit this week, so I’ve included the last line from last week.
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The serpent continued to thrash, golden fangs exposed.
“Stop!” M’lan gasped. The air shimmered, the columns trembled, and the walls seemed to warp and expand. Suddenly everything became still, the silence acute. The statue was as it had been before. Only a few broken stones and Raffe’s limp body showed anything had happened.
M’lan stared at the lifeless, graceful statue of the serpent, sacred waters once again dribbling benignly from its fangs into the pool below. Despite its tranquility, it seemed to be laughing at him.
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M’lan, headmaster of the order of Ka’alar and Jamil Jarka, king’s assassin, find their impossible love challenged to the utmost as a rebellion sweeps them apart, sending Jamil on a dangerous mission to assassinate the rebel leader, General Charvat. Unknown to anyone, Charvat is on his way to the temple to exploit the headmaster’s magical abilities.
When the rebel army arrives, M’lan is thrust into a struggle against political and sexual dominance as Charvat attempts to break his resistance. Violence and death mount, awakening within M’lan both the powers of destruction and the desire for revenge.
On the trail of his prey, Jamil begins to question his devotion to M’lan as his once innocent lover transforms into a mage and invades the assassin’s thoughts and dreams. The closer Jamil draws to M’lan, the more he puts his life and his very soul at risk. Jamil soon realizes that his lover might prove to be more deadly than the man he was sent to kill.
A final confrontation between assassin and monk might destroy them both, but Jamil is relentless in his determination to rescue M’lan, for he knows that only his love can master the mage.
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I love the final line – gives an intriguing twist to the God!
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Very cool snippet. I love the idea of the statue coming to life. I agree with Peter, love the last line.
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Great job mixing action with description. Loved this snippet!
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Amy is right, Alexis. You got the balance perfect. There is a sense of great ancient power stirring and settling. Very cool!
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Suspenseful combined with a magical feeling. You always know how to create this.
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At least he got it to stop, although I have a feeling maybe it retreated more because it wanted to than it was obeying him. Intriguing. I love this world – great snippet!
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I don’t think he’s finished dealing with this statue.
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So, does he have powers he’s not aware of–or not really in control of? Your writing is always so incredibly visual. 🙂
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Even after the statue returns to its “not alive” form it still seems to be mocking him. It knows what he’s awakened, and I’m betting some dire consequences lie ahead. Great snippet!
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Love the description in this snippet…very interesting read.
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He got that under control quicker than I expected. But I agree, he;s being mocked, probably!
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Great visuals here. I agree that the serpent might not be done with him. I’m always suspicious of smiling snakes. 🙂
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I love this scene, the snake coming to life and then just being a statue, mocking even his perception of reality. Great snippet!
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